Tuesday, February 17, 2009

My Little Puppy (fiction)

One summer afternoon my mother , father , and I went to the pet store to buy a puppy. When we went in we saw big dogs , small dogs , baby dogs , adult dogs , good dogs , bad dogs , and a whole lot more. We're getting the puppy for my baby brother Jake's fifth birthday. He said that he wanted a baby podle. We we're getting it for a party after he got home from daycare. We are inviting some of his best friends and some of my best friends too. We picked out a white podle with a bushy tail. When we got home everybody was already there. We went to pick Jake up from daycare. When we got home the party started. There was a Speed Racer cake , and Elmo cupcakes. A bunch of presents we're there too. We had lots of fun all afternoon!
by Jasmyn T.

2 comments:

Trish said...

Jazmyn,

What a wonderful story. You did a great job. Mrs. Spencer

Ms. Murphy said...

Hi Jasmyn, I am sorry to respond so long after your post. I love your story, of course I love any story about the closeness of family.